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I've no idea why but this gives me some deja vu.
Maybe it's because I used to make songs that were just a bit too repetetive.
Uh, cool, I guess.

Spikrin responds:

Thank you for the review! I appreciate it. I'm making way better songs now, they're wip, please check back for more and maybe follow if u haven't? seriously follow me i have only one fan here. rip.

Whoah, there, buddy. Little too repetetive.
Some degree of repetition is appropriate but really, I felt like the song didn't really head in any direction.

eatmeatleet responds:

hey, thank you for the comment.
I kinda agree. I had an old project but could not really make a full song out of it but I like the general feel and decided to put something together anyway

Have a nice day :)

something just doesn't really sit well with me about the drums
namely the snare in the first portion of the song
i love the instruments tho (yet they sound a little dry)

Droid responds:

Thanks for the feedback! This was just something threw together quick and didnt really think too much about mixing or choosing drums or anything. I'll definitely keep that in mind though!

Need to work on your chord stacks and whatnot.
I've learned how to stack chords pretty well from Ieolia's "Dubstep Masterclass" video series. I think it was the third video or something, but the chords I make now sound fuller, fatter, whatever you want to call it.
Keep jammin'.

LLCALIREP responds:

Yeah they need more energy, I'll check it out!

this made me go
O O F

ThiefOfVoid responds:

I know, the CRINGE!

I'm appalled by your avant-garde take on the music industry.

DemonicNobility responds:

Thanks, I will try to make an extended cut!

liquid meme

DemonicNobility responds:

gasseous meme

review.

Ravitex responds:

No.

I like the cause, I really do. I experience symptoms _similar_ to that of Aspergers syndrome (although it turned out to be a cocktail of ADHD, depression and anxiety) so I know how you feel, to some extent. I have gotten over it by now but I do remember the first few years of my life (or rather 14) as being very awkward due to it.

But... the song really isn't that great. The vocals are a bit messy, and the lyrics aren't anything too good. Sorry to say such a thing but my ears just aren't all too pleased by them. Backing track is good though, I like it.

Keep at it; you're very good at these sorts of pieces, as far as the composition goes. But you may want to hire a vocalist in the future if you want to make something highly professional.

maxxpump responds:

I'm admittedly not the best singer by any standard, but for someone with a speech impediment I'm not bad by any means. The lyrics I wrote were true to me. The singings in tune and the harmonies are in exact sync and also in tune. I've been playing this one on and off live and am a singer in my band, we get an average turnout of around five to six hundred people, and apart from on Newgrounds I've never had a complaint about my singing. I'm not classically trained and am self taught, same with my keyboard playing. This song is a bit of a scrap project and I know it could be better.

I don't actually know anyone who would sing for me, I've asked around new ground numerous times and only pulled blanks which is a great shame as I have alot of singer songwriter songs on the back burner and won't release them until I have a decent vocal.

Releasing this song was one of the worst ideas I've had yet as I had nothing but hate through the mailing system, people telling me to pack it in and leave newgrounds. The lyrics reflect the fact that people generally treat me like shit, and this is whats happened yesterday also, so nothings changed, as I said in the song its just another hiccup and I just have to get on with it.

Thanks for your notes on the composition I will keep on making pieces like this and hopefully one day be able to hook up with a vocalist which sounds slightly better than me. As that's were I admit, I'm in tune but my voice just doesn't sound pleasing enough to be a singer as a profession, but it gets me by and it does pay the bills to some extent.

Low-res string sample really added the final touch to an already great song. Made me think I was listening to an old PCM sample from an old console.

rikcobra responds:

Im glad you liked it! For me that sample added some grit and made it feel a bit more dusty in a sense, which is what i was looking for :)

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